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Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 18

szaleniec1000 Apr 10, 2013 00:36

You're probably thinking right now that there's no way Hogwarts Exposed can get any worse. You would, of course, be wrong.

( Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 18 )

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Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 14 part 1

szaleniec1000 Aug 20, 2012 16:37

Happy birthday, sith_droideka! :)

( Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 14 )

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Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 4 part 5

szaleniec1000 Feb 17, 2012 21:17

And so it's finally time for Hogwarts Too Exposed to go to Hogwarts. The author commented that he'd only intended the "vacation" to last a single chapter but got carried away, and that explains a lot.

( All aboard! )

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